Forgive Me

byPacoFear©

~*~*~Forgive Me~*~*~

Forgive me once if I stop to stare,
At moonlit strands of midnight hair
Borne on wintry tides of air.

Forgive me twice if I linger awhile,
To maybe catch that smallest smile
That somehow makes the day worthwhile

Forgive me thrice, no more no less,
For my visions of you in that little black dress
Nam pulcherrima et dulcissima tuus es.

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by Anonymous09/06/13

Thank you

It's been over a year (two?) since I first read this poem, and I can still recite it from memory. I'd never been much interested in poetry, and still am not, but this particular piece stirs something inmore...

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Magnificent

You never cease to amaze me. Everything you write is so perfect it almost hurts.
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