- Non-Erotic Poetry
- forgiveness
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Forgiveness
by seranade
Dare I taunt the Winters dance
toasty toes on a window seal
out the window with a second glance
Okay, so I took off my pants!
The snow was collecting in rather large mounds
wind was blowing so I made moaning howls
I was warm and dancing around
I wasn't gonna let winter get me down!
Stood at the window and shook my ass bare
I may have even raised a middle finger there
at Winter's virgin white spreading vale
That's when it happened without fail
The power went out all through the Valley
in darkness I sat at a window peering out
asking winter for forgiveness with plea
I was eight days without electricity
(This was based on actual events. I want to thank Art for helping me with this poem. It would not be the Poem it is with out his help, and thanks for allowing this poem to be a part of a the contest. Thanks for the reads, comments and votes to all, alby-thankfull:)
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 19 years agoI was eight days without electricity <--YIKES! Not fun!
Good poem. A little bumpy here and there, but I definitely enjoyed the little bit of humor you added to this piece. I had a chuckle in a few areas. Poor thing at the same time. Thanks for the read.
Du Lacabout 19 years agoVery visual and I wanted to be right there with you lol.. laughed and felt the snow dance on the mountain tops of my nip....? lol.. had fun with this one.. good write and healthy belly laugh
thank you for the read..
Du~
Ninja Nookieabout 19 years agodoesn't sound like mother nature
forgave ya! <grin> cute poem and
a touch of reality, excellent!
Liarabout 19 years agoYour poem has been mentioned in the New Poem thread at the poetry board.
