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Click hereI’m merely
a shell
of my
former shadow.
This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>
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Perhaps the next narrative following your poem could be: Cheer Up! Compared with what's coming up you are now in great condition... mmm, nothing can cheer me up better than some fine tuned dark humor!
other such words formed a bit different but, the message is still potent...blue
Wow another short, home run ~!!!
I love the wording you have used. Paints a picture of remorse and regret. I hope this is not the case my friend, for we value your writing and friendship here.
Love this poem of the shadows shell. Ya know, all it takes is to STEP out of the shadow into the full sun of life. Just have faith and all shall work out, if it tis your desire. Just me ~
Wonderful poem !!