- Non-Erotic Poetry
- freezerburn
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your tongue
with its biting remarks
and cold tone
set me shivering
like ice-laden branches
being disciplined by the wind
the fangs of your
winter storm eyes
pierce the soft porcelain
that cowers helplessly
beneath your scrutiny
mirrored sapphire windows
voluntarily overlook
your raging blizzard
of dagger sharp icicles
and stinging flurries
desperately watching the spirals form
on a glass heart that is foreign now
in a place where the only beat you hear
is the dropping of the temperature
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My Erotic Taleabout 19 years agoyour poem was mentioned on the thread
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foehnabout 19 years agoGood clarity and unity, very good poem. I just wasn't sure of "spirals," and then "beat" as a dropping of temperature... Those questions didn't bother me much, as everything else was so crystal-clear. Thanks.
