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Click hereIt starts with grind
and ends in polish
Gritty, roughness dryly cuts while
shiny-clever lubricating endearments
distract from abrasion
Wince turns to gasp
Steady slip smooth persistance
rubs fine - finer - finest - finishing
Exposing me, stroke by stroke
layer by layer, laying me bare
Blowing my dust
Provoking my lustre
Revealing my gloss
Making me vulnerable
where I used to be robust
Caressing the shine
Until I'm his mirror
shine does indeed take a little work and finesse, but when done just right, leaves us glowing and open!
Making me vulnerable
where I used to be robust
Caressing the shine
Until I'm his mirror
Love this stanza - reflected lust...who's reflecting whom?
Great work! Thanks, LJ.
Caressing the shine
until I'm his mirror
I liked it even more the on the second read.
"Making me vulnerable
where I used to be robust
Caressing the shine
Until I'm his mirror"
This says so very much. Eloquence abounds, love. I may be off but it screams to me... "Shape me! You've made me who I am."
Great work.