- Non-Erotic Poetry
- From Afar
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A lens to bring you to me
To extend my vision
To make you clear
I can see you
Through dust and wind
Over time and chance
In night or day
I can reach you
A finger from a mile
Needle from a hilltop
Spear from a shade
I can take you
Invisible surgeon
Cutting strings clean
Leaving a mess
I can end you
Long range execution
At any time any where
Always a risk
You are mine
- COMMENTS
twelveooneover 10 years agoyou can do this with about half the words, and I would recommend removal of some. Do you need l2,l3 for example
like these lines
A finger from a mile
Needle from a hilltop
Spear from a shade
don't know how appropriate that is, but 5, I'll save the crosshairs for later
Ashesh9over 10 years agoWakin' Down you are Terrific & Versatile !!
HarryHillover 10 years agoglad there were fresh eyes to see and recommend this. All the rounds.
GuiltyPleasureover 10 years ago....fast becoming one of my "to look for" poets. The chill sets in slowly until icy realisation sets in. Well done.
