from the last shelf

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soon as I slid off Carla's slim
hips she did it:
banished me to
the fat jeans shelf

then they scolded her
get them out of the house!
it will be a symbol of no going back

but believe me
as long as there exists
peanut butter, chocolate and cheese,
there will be going back and again

soon will come the regret
of the transfer from
fat shelf to plastic bag to fat jean
orphanage (aka Goodwill)
where I wait for the next
big boned babe on an upswing,
not yet ready to commit
to paying full price
to cover her new curves

maybe Carla will
watch us wriggle down these
small town sidewalks
and remember what it is like
to breathe easy within seams

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Survivor Poem
Trigger 20
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TzaraTzaraalmost 15 years ago
Good poem, Anna.

Excellent solution to the trigger as well--one that makes sense as a poem, not just as a dashed-off thing to satisfy a requirement.

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellalmost 15 years ago
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Oh yes the struggle of the ups and downs of the perpetual diet! Sigh ... I know it well!

ishtatishtatalmost 15 years ago
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I really liked this. One tiny quibble that perhaps a little very light pruning and one period might help - then maybe not.

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 15 years ago
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As usual, a fantastic poem from anna. That first stanza is just wonderful.

Epmd607Epmd607almost 15 years ago
good poem

really liked the last two stanzas.