Full Moon

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cavu182
cavu182
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The nearly-full moon is setting
and I'm betting
it will rise again tomorrow
at ten p.m.,
10:02 to be exact
a Full Moon
forecast to be clear night,
rising just after sunset
setting the following morning.
The moon and sun
chasing each other
balancing the tides,
tugging at the heart strings of man,
and women too.

the full moon
The Full Moon
THE FULL MOON ...
what would poets do without her
and howling dogs, coyotes, wolfs
and lovers
entwined beneath her
on a clear cool night,

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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasurealmost 13 years ago
More...

...prose than poetry but some interesting directions. Just a teeny bit cliche'd.

Tess

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 13 years ago
This moon unit

does not HOWL, i.e. if you take the stock image, don't run it though the same way. A4

wildsweetonewildsweetonealmost 13 years ago

i like the idea of this poem. i think i'd tweak it a bit... use different turns of phrase to make it more poetic. but then, perhaps the differences in:

ten p.m.,

10:02

(either 10:00 and 10:02 or, ten p.m. and ten o two p.m.)

and

tugging at the heart strings of man,

and women

(either man and woman or, men and women)

are poetically quirky in their own right.

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