Gamed

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My mind knows of no time

That put me ahead of the game

Stepping off curbs

Empty of ground

Heeled in wondering

Debt on my shoe

Circling around

Picking up the scrabble square

Make a new word

Carving out the points made

Charged Q against score

Punch the ticket

Stack’m and count E’m

Fan out the green backs

Gage, spindle

Rubber band the deck

Buy in Marvin Gardens

No, make mine Park Ave

Pull out the cards

Tossing die

Bag my rook to your queen

She’ll be the deciding piece

But pawns

Now, they tell the real story

Fold the board

Take it home

Call it by any name you want

Tag- your it!

Resume this in the morning


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KOLKOREKOLKOREover 17 years ago
All gamed out

A VERY impressive; melancholic, but also defiant at the end poem. I love the imagery - rich but not over burdening, just right to this reader‘s taste.

As a non native speaker of English my command would never be equal to those who were born to it. So with this caveat in mind, I’ll respectfully say that I have arrived to a different take on this poem compared with the one LeBroZ seems to be pointing at (there could be more than one legitimate readings of course).

I see this poem as a point of departure from all that is associated with games in life. The rich and varied images, which admittedly sent me more than once to the dictionary, are used to present the illusionary unreliable and unrepresentative qualities of games in life. Clearly, the goal here is not to keep a dichotomy between ‘games’ and ‘life’, but rather to force a new perspective on life (the beliefs attitudes relations associated with playing games?). I have not seen here the fun or the excitement (legitimate perspectives) but rather a challenging; confrontational person, recounting life – without the “benefits” of past illusions (first stanza). And what could be more blatant than a challenge to the king of the games:”Bag my rook to your queen/ She’ll be the deciding piece/ But pawns/ Now, they tell the real story”. You can play the game by its rules (there you have the deciding piece”) yet, pawns the weakest tools in the game, are not so in “the real story”. Finally, the exclamation “tag- your it!” Under most of the definitions I found, from the most common to those I have not heard before, “Tag” is not a complementary label (I am being euphemistic). And the ‘gamer’ in the morning will probably won’t have the narrator in the poem as a partner.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Go ahead

Play some games here;

Best be careful

Lest she get you

En passant.

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