Girl in a Bar

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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
A LEZ" PICK-UP

with a stranger. TK U MLJ LV NV

h1s4k0h1s4k0almost 16 years ago
In regards to my "100% - Loved it!"

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That was a rather rough copy of that poem, so sorry. I've submitted the final edition, along with audio ^_~ to Literotica. Hopefully within 3 days the submission will be accepted. If you'd like to read/hear it then, you know how to find me :)

h1s4k0h1s4k0almost 16 years ago
100% - Loved it

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Goodness, My Dear

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What beautiful art

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You certainly know

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How to tease a girl's heart

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Your dialogue is nice

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And you rhyme so well

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Fitting words perfectly

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As your characters tell

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The story is sublime

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The flow - no flaw

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With seducitive imagery

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My mind an awe<br> <br>

To have read on this meeting<Br>

To have placed myself there<br>

Become that petted female<br>

Who instead has black hair<br> <br>

A body just as wanting<br>

My signs tell the same<br>

But instead of walking away<br>

I'd stay for the game<br><br>

I must say I'm jealous<br>

In this reading chance<br>

Instead of joining you<br>

In your bisexual romance<br><br>

"Next time" you say<br>

As I'm cupping my chin<br>

"Next time we shall<br>

Allow the flames out, within"<br><br>

And if we do meet<br>

Oh heavin forbid<br>

For thoughts about you<br>

My mind can not rid<br><br>

Our tantilizing touches<br>

Your sensational scent<br>

My whispering whimpers<br>

In a dictating descent <br><br>

I'll tell you of your beauty<br>

What I see through my eyes<br>

Of savory details<br>

You won't receive from guys<br><br>

Soft touches on your skin<br>

Gentle kisses on your lips<br>

A body just as turned on<br>

Without the male bump to your hips<br><br>

A smooth mound, as yours<br>

No crotch to protrude<br>

To prod at your treasure<br>

Like a guys crotch so rude<br><br>

I'd caress your body<br>

Find those sweet spots<br>

And work them just right<br>

So you get the hots<br><br>

Then tease you a bit<br>

As your eyes start a glow<br>

And nipples do harden<br>

Your nipping does show<br><br>

Two fingers firmly placed<br>

Aside the hardening bits<br>

As my hands also cup<br>

The under of your tits<br><br>

Massaging so careful<br>

Watching with intent<br>

The expressoins you make<br>

To their fullest extent<br><br>

Reaching a moment<br>

When pleasure is high<br>

I'll slide up a hand<br>

Against your thigh<br><br>

Tease at your panties<br>

Or even lack of<br>

Tracing my fingers<br>

Still watching above<br><br>

As your breath quickens<br>

Chest rises and falls<br>

Then give you support<br>

Lean you against the walls<br><br>

A decent I begin<br>

But along the way<br>

I give a playful tap<br>

It is time to play<br><br>

But if you wish to read more<br>

I await your reply<br>

Goodnight my, Darling<br>

A kiss and goodbye<br><br>

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Prrvocative

Sensuous illustration enhances this erotic Masterpiece.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Potential bi-sexual encounter...

twarted at the last second...maybe better luck next time.

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