Give and Take

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Estimated
guestimated
bullshit
lies
and
cries
of
passion
fucking
lost ones
screaming
pounding
flesh
fantasy
tearing
through
my
brain
spilling
over
wasted
youth
sexual
adventurer
contender
loser
wins.

j.b.

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rikaaimrikaaimabout 18 years ago
Wow!

This was simply amazing. I read it once over with a pounding force that drives and commands. The format is strong, fast, direct. The words are torn. They want one thing, press for one thing, but they seem to desire another, a struggle for realse. Once again I am impressed. You never cease to amaze. I love the format.

Jennifer CJennifer Cover 18 years ago
Powerful

Erotic and angry at the same time,

I liked it though.

Thanks,

~ Jenn

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