Give Me Twenty

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JUDO
JUDO
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(inspired by WickedEve's TABOO thread)

Eyes lock to the familiar
Craving which flames obscene.
Focused intrusion shunts aside
All in all who stand between.

Two decades of hot Augusts,
But not a day seems passed.
A closed door and key secure
Dark needs playground at last.

Mouths stirred to bite,
Mounds firm to grope,
Scarf blinds the eyes
Hands teased with rope.

Cloth stripped from skin
Hard tip swallowed within
Humid oven unseen
Sucking sounds obscene.

Legs split with delight
Crow merrily alight.
Demons sings and groan
Dripping from the bone.

When exhales begin
And time moves to slow
The buttons find holes
And ties crease to bow.

Brushed hair finds a curve
Lips paint their red.
Minds chuckle with pictures
Of their lives unled.

A smile, then a word
Find hands clasped to part,
"Again, shall we dance
Two decades apart?"

JUDO
JUDO
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WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
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These two stanzas:

Legs split with delight

Crow merrily alight.

Demons sings and groan

Dripping from the bone.

When exhales begin

And time moves to slow

The buttons find holes

And ties crease to bow.

Great poem, but I just love those 2 stanzas.

Glad you were inspired by the thread. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
much better

than you poem yesterday. I must say, I have a had a difficult time finding the excellence that so many of the old poets here rave about in your work. You must have been very committed when you first began posting and now you have gained respect and stopped trying. This is pretty good though

thegirlfriday11thegirlfriday11over 19 years ago
:-)

that poem is pretty hot!

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