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seems like one of those poems
when the fireworks just finished
or have not started

we went for a drink or the toilet
never returned to soft lawn in July
to bend neck ooooing

we went down on our knees
got sloppy
gurgled in each others juice

near the water, onlookers
saw two shows
reflections extinguished

we went for more conversation
hair pulling
incineration, like chain-smokes
only more breathless

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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 16 years ago
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WickedEveWickedEveabout 20 years ago
Love the poem

This is really good:

incineration, like chain-smokes

only more breathless

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
I love fireworks

Both kinds. :-)

AngelineAngelineabout 20 years ago
Uh huh

I'm dying to know if it really happened, but asking would be so indiscreet, lol. Needless to say, it's well written with er vivid imagery. :)

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