Hades Habilis

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Liar
Liar
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sing the Homo Hades blues
latent instincts' holy cows
in your snake skin shackled shoes
spread like manure blatant vows

lean in closer, drink her haze
share a scotch soaked silent slip
set a sleeping fuel ablaze
in your predatory grip

call to clamor as you sway
neath the gristly half moon grin
fuck like phantoms in the fray
taste the tragedy throgh skin

bow to basics, pagan beats
matching bodies trapped in dance
clutch the ripe and ripped up sheets
framing carnal clay expanse

sing the blues, parade anew
through a morning stunned by sight
watch a vow turn ugly true
with that sway turned grey by light

did you think of shellchock news
Homo Habilis in bloom
when you sang the Hades blues
in that fevered frenzy room

Liar
Liar
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twelveoonetwelveooneover 19 years ago
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shellchock, comparision of the news with the game? Reference to the band? Agree with Eve, unique phrases.

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
chock

typo: throgh

shellchock? shellshock? typo or I just don't get it? Unless it's like shell and chocked full put together to resemble shellshock but a shellshock that's chocked full. Honestly, I'm putting too much effort into this word. :)

Anyway, the poem is chocked full of unique phrases. Maybe too much of a good thing? But still good.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
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