- Erotic Poetry
- Haiku Cycle
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Click hereCurve of lover's hips
Evoking deep dark desires
To bend her over.
Dew glistens in fields
Of pink flowers opening
To receive his gift.
Olive body stretched
Over my bed's satin sheets,
Giving joys divine.
Hot flesh colliding,
Limbs and bodies linked as one,
Falling in a heap.
Twin bare mountain peaks
Blanketed with guilty signs
Of man's great pleasure.
- COMMENTS
Esperanza_Hidalgoabout 13 years agoWhen I read it, I liked all of the first two lines but not the third, or action. It reads good and a five despite not being Haiku or the little nag.
vrosej10about 13 years agoHaiku is like porn, I know it when I see it, and this ain't it. Two images one moment, no closure, possibly a season word and the two images shouldn't directly flow from one and other.
However this is well written and works as a group of tercets or as a group poem. The name hurt you.
twelveooneabout 13 years agoYou hurt yourself by calling it Haiku Cycle, this is pretty much short line free verse and as such, you are liberated from count.
100
theognisabout 13 years ago"Dew glistens in fields
Of pink flowers opening
To receive his gift."
Superb.
Five.
