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Click herehazy room spins, crazy head throbs
squeezed in compression, pain needs suppression
medicine cabinet - aspirin !
fingers fumble, childproof cap won't budge
hurl bottle across room - still closed
bash and break it, swallow several
Hmm... how about changing lines 3 and 4:
<br>medicine cabinet
<br>childproof cap, fingers fumble
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<br><br>I'd make those simple changes since your poem already implies that the cap won't budge. <br>And there's no need to <br>spoon feed the reader "asprin." :)