Harbin afternoon languor

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sweat-soaked sheets
hold us
captive to sated lust

sunlight, too heavy
to bear
pounds insistently
at curtained windows

muffled but little
by a chair-perched clattering fan

whose whispering kisses
mimic our own
in tentative invitation
to a slippery slumber

that lays languid
on my lashes,
gently weighting my lids
beyond lifting

lips curl as I'm drifting
into a smile that begins
in my naval
then streams up
to lift earlobes

I am throbbing
with the pleasure of you still

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normal jeannormal jeanover 13 years ago
Sister Syn!!!! How great

to see a poem by you. I have really missed the good ol' days when there was some good poetry and people who knew what it meant to read a good poem.

This one reminds me of that movie, "Long, Hot Summer" with Melanie Griffith,..I hope I have the correct one.

I love the visuals and even the audible qualities of your work. You always "take me there."

Another H worthy poem by a fabulous Lit poet. Hope to see more from you, I lurk and read what is worthy, leave comments when the poem deserves it. I hope I get to vote on this one in the Feb contest next year ;)

jthserrajthserraover 13 years ago
So wonderful

to see this familiar name again! And wow, your poetry is just as good as I remembered. So sensuous and erotic...

jim : )

LapisLazzuliLapisLazzuliover 13 years ago
Delicious!

As good a description of post-coital bliss as I've read in a long while. Exquisitely relaxing!

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