It was just a small cut, a
shiver of slow-moving pain, a
dull throb really, with
very little blood, just
little beads on a
bright new bracelet
worn in her private
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if you didn't want comments on the infliction of pain by young girls, (something I'll never understand) why write this aesthetically pleasing origami of self mutilation?
the b's are very nice.
A pain to blot out bigger pains?
....this seems to be about "cutting" - most often suffered by young (Princess?) females. It is a sad reality in our time and this short piece invokes the lonliness and hidden pain well. Five.
on a young girl with a shiny new bauble, TK U MLJ LV NV
I'm no sonics expert, but even I can hear them here. I'm not wild about the title, though. Wondering about the private Princess time. hmmm.
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