He Came, She Saw, He Cocked Her

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He Came, She Saw, He Cocked Her…

Standing near the bedroom door
She saw him, cock in hand.
She almost left but couldn’t move
His member was quite grand.

His dick was long and oh so hard
As he squeezed and pumped it fast.
She saw the veins and glistening head
And knew he wouldn’t last.

Why did he want to jack himself
When she was hot to trot?
Why not call out to her for sex?
Was all she ever thought.

She heard him moan in sheer delight
And her pussy got quite wet
Well, I’ll be damned, she told herself,
This isn’t over yet.

She squirmed and wiggled in hot delight
Her fingers now on clit
She rubbed and tweaked that little thing
Her fingers in her slit.

She watched him cum in spurts and jerks
Herself not far behind
He yelled and screamed in full release
And now she did not mind.

As if on cue he turned his head
And saw her standing there
Her fingers on her swollen clit
Her head thrown back in prayer.

Oh Jesus Christ, she said out loud
And realized her fate
She came, he knelt in front of her
Like a Christian at the gate.

He lay her down, and got on top
His cock had grown again.
He pushed and pushed til he got in
To waste would be a sin.

They fucked and groped and bucked all night
Their juices flowed like wine
They poked, they licked, and fucked some more
They lost all track of time.

When they were done and fully spent
She asked him why he jacked it.
He said “my dear, you were not there,
And so I simply whacked it.

No harm no foul, we both had fun
You surely seemed to love it
You’re right, said she, but now and then
In me you need to shove it.


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notnamernotnamerabout 16 years ago
Analysis

Has good flow which is only lost here and there -

----- For example line 6: As he squeezed and pumped it fast.

----- would have slightly better flow as: As he pumped that squeeze so fast.

----- Bigger problem is the poem has no tone: the sing songy nature of the poetic structure obviates that

----- But sustaining flow over this long a poem shows talent