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Click hereLying here
You between my thighs
It's very clear
You're nearing the prize
With your talented mouth
And your luscious lips
As you go down south
My control slips
I feel so intense
As I grab onto these bars
Desire immense
You make me see stars
I feel my legs shake
I can hardly breathe
I burn and I ache
With this web that you weave
I am all in
There is no doubt
You're my sweetest sin
I can't live without
You do me so good
Your technique is quite swell
It's understood
I'm under your spell
I want more
Oh how you tease
Lust oozing from every pore
Oh God please
You have the right touch
The sweetest caress
I want it so much
This I do confess
Your hands on my skin
As you go in deep
I admit it you win
It's yours to keep
Your body next to mine
Snuggled up tight
I'm on cloud nine
All through the night
I can only echo Oldbear...My favourite lines are; 'your technique is quite swell' and
'You're my sweetest sin'...Well done!
Some wonderful sexy lines ("lying there you between my thighs," "You're my sweetest sin" as examples) A suggestion, if I may? Don't let rhyme trap you into using words or phrases that may not be the best fit for the mood you are creating ("your technique is quite swell") I used to do that a lot. Better to write it without trying to rhyme and maybe go with that, or then see how rhyming might fit without using words that are obviously there only because they rhyme.
Looking forward to more of your work...