Heavenly Bodies

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clingy webbed top, slides

down cherry, kissed skin.
puddling down the carpet

below. pink thong rides high,

on saw horse hips. Fidgety
fingers, fumble. wantonly

grasping halo of soft, feathery
hair. mounting hunger unleashed

upon utopias peaks. razzling
raspberries suckled by beseeching

bites. twiddling twist, jerks
close. cosmic tortious tornado

uniting sonic bodies of heated
morphical mounds. smokey haze

smolders volcanic combustion
released. heaven, on earth.

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echoes_sechoes_sover 18 years ago
Oh my!

what have I been missing? or who?

I do love this, beautiful work. Thank you.

sacksackover 18 years ago
You know I love short lines.....

and the line breaks were quite effective!

Honey123Honey123over 18 years ago
Mmmm...Cherry!

The second time I read, the more I liked it! Great description in your words...

~Honey

TathagataTathagataover 18 years ago
I loved cherry

kissed skin and saw horse hips.

The line breaks threw me off a little as did some of the punctuation...all things that get better the more you write.

: )

I can see you getting better each time.

Keep at it

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
just love this phrase

uniting sonic bodies of heated

morphical mounds. smokey haze

has nice resonation qualities I enjoy reading...smiles/bluerains

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