Hands held demurely
Beneath her ass
Sweet ,dimpled smile
Submissive lass
Delicate , coy
Feminine
Bliss was it
Her heart to win
Intelligent too
An engineer
Excellent cook
A perfect dear
What secrets
Does her body hold
Shy above, but
Below bold ???
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nicely done
the first lines are great, perhaps drop detail of career to make more universal,and suggest more in final line, there a little mysterious detail would add- gave it a 5-
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I am sure the brain is not involved TK U MLJ LV NV
The enjambment was well done. I usually don't care much for the erotic poems here, but this was really good.
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