Her hands were firm yet gentle

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     Her hands were firm yet gentle, as she clasped them to my hips, and drew me like a magnet to caress me with her lips. I hummed in harmony, as she commandeered my neck, and inhaled as smoothly as a breeze upon a deck. Her domineering kisses, traced up and down my spine, while her hands stroked me deftly, designating me her shrine. The smell of ocean tide, clung to her wavy hair, as I to her body casting complemental care. I whispered words of love, proposed eternity to share; and, she smiled so brightly moonlight could never dare compare.

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Her hands were firm yet gentle
as she clasped them to my hips,
and drew me like a magnet
to caress me with her lips.

I hummed in harmony
as she commandeered my neck,
and inhaled as smoothly
as a breeze upon a deck.

Her domineering kisses
traced up and down my spine,
while her hands stroked me deftly
designating me her shrine.

The smell of ocean tide
clung to her wavy hair,
as I to her body
casting complemental care.

I whispered words of love,
proposed eternity to share;
and, she smiled so brightly
moonlight could never dare compare.

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3 Comments
Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
As von Krafft-ebbing or Freud might have analyzed the poet :

The subject likes to lie back & be 'done' erotically by a Domineerin' lover !!5-ed .

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago
I like the vertical better

I like the piece overall. Been too long in my life since anything along these lines has happened.

Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
Beautiful

I love loving erotica. Nice.