- Erotic Poetry
- Her Scent Lingers
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Touching a moist cheek,
inhaling ripe scent,
and the flash exuded from two as one
transcends a honeysuckle sun
or a purple twilight wane.
She fuels fascination, excitement, wonder, surprise,
frustration
and ignites a pyre of adolescent fancy.
I need the breathless music of my whispered name
when zenith lifts her need.
- COMMENTS
WillowedCabinalmost 13 years agoway to wordy and the rhythm is off. However, the ideas in here are much more original than your other works. Also, the second stanza should just be cut out completely or reworked; it's too wordy, too hackneyed.
