tagNon-Erotic PoetryHere's to You, Mr. Robinson

Here's to You, Mr. Robinson

bygreenmountaineer©

So what to do but to relish sweet lips
sans mercie and make moan a faerie,
my make believe dame whose grot is an alley
in Plastic City between tall buildings
before my work is reviewed by short men
in polyester powder blue suits.

Better yet I favor under the covers
calling in sick from the Holiday Inn
with pseudo Suzie, tomorrow she's Jane,
before the freeway, two bottles of wine,
one for the Mrs. I take mine
for the lingering smell of Ben.

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by greenmountaineer07/13/14

2 layers, 1201: yes on the "gay," ie. bisexual, when lines 1-3 are combined with the last line

or

Ben was the name of the character Dustin Hoffman played in "The Graduate."

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by tazz31707/13/14

COOOO...CO KA CHU

and the same for you. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by twelveoone07/13/14

Ben

gay?
5ed as per...I don't know if this was the direction of the incomplete pun, if not - Law of Unintended Consequences
Have you heard the word
of Andrew Jackson
Jihad
oh never mind
oh never mind

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