tagErotic PoetryHey Anonymous

Hey Anonymous

byjack30341©

Hey Anon-y-mous
how is it fair
you make it impossible
to tell whether you care

leave me some-thing
c'mon, a comment or vote
it's not like I'm begging
for you to gush or to dote

I just want some idea
don't spend alot of time
just what did you think
am I wasting my rhyme

because I want to have had
some effect or some result
whether for good or for mischief
or even just tumult

don't know if I'd write
if it was only about me
need to know if it matters
to be or not to be

so here I'll sit
and continue to wait
thinking maybe there was a smile
or got you to masturbate


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by jack3034112/18/14

:-)

Much thanks.

Without your reading it, it doesn't matter.

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by Anonymous12/18/14

okay, I'll bite

I love your stories and poems, dear jack, because they're well-written accounts of hot motherfucking, the best kind of fucking there is. A boy's penis and his mother's vagina--made for each other.

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