- Erotic Poetry
- Hidden Delight
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I am a profusion of hidden delights. For you to see all of me. To show you what I have been wanting to share with you. Our bodies locked in a dance of blissful passion and seduction. You pull aside the strip of lace and silently worship my hidden treasure.
I separate my legs. Exposing my sex to you. My pink lips giving away their secret. With my hand I reach between my legs. My middle finger slides right in. You can see my wetness. I know you want to taste me. To bury your face between my legs.
My hand opening my lips, I can't spread myself open enough. You can hear my wetness as I work my fingers in and out. I continue that rhythm, in and out, softy moaning. My breathing quickens. My lips still parted for you to see. I am imagining you licking your lips.
Feeling that electric sensation. Your tongue, warm and wet, gently parting my lips. Filling your hungry mouth with my flavor. You run your tongue between my pink, puckered lips savoring the salty sweetness, working it's way between my legs. Oh yes, just there. As the softness gives way, letting you in to that deep waiting heat, full of hot scent and thick texture.
My moistness upon your tongue. Savoring the sweet juices which overwhelmed your senses. I grind out my passion between moans and sweet sighs. You plunder my body penetrating the very core of my existence, every lustful desire now softly escaping my lips of passion and pleasure. Now that your touches have aroused all of my senses, I see your own arousal, standing firm.
- COMMENTS
buttersalmost 13 years agothough written in a way that suggests there's possibility for improvement. my main problem isn't so much the I's, my's and you's (though they are intrusive) as the unoriginality of the phrasing even whilst it manages to avoid the boring vulgarities so often used. there's even room for those in erotic writing, but there's not a whole lot going on here that will engage the average reader ... the salivating hounds will no doubt lap it up, but not all readers are so brain-dead :)
if written for a specific individual already panting after your persona, or one who genuinely likes as well as fancies you, then i do not doubt for one moment that this will mean far more to them, and be far more arousing, than it will be to the more excluded reader.
it's all a bit dull, sorry.
colddieselalmost 13 years agoI's and my's are rarely an interesting subject and you have confirmed the maxim. I haven't left a score because I'm a kindly soul.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoVisually stimulates through the strategic structure of words. Nicely thought out.
twelveoonealmost 13 years agoa pussy, that you are in love with? This, darling, is cliched garbage. I voted a three, I'm sure you can twitter enough of your friends to H it to the top list.
Clue, do you think you are the only girl in the world with one? Avoid the "I" you will be better off.
