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"Nein danka," she says,
her wry smile belies truth -
the negotiable opportunity
like an errant strap
some negligent negligee
exposes a forbidden glimpse
concealed before a hope
until floodlit in red light.
Euros slip beneath
to tumescent flesh,
fiscal fervor yields
to a torrent of touch,
fingers, tongue and cock
momentarily inundate
then recede to damp aftermath
and thick mud of money.
and an excellent example of no wasted words: you made every one work. Always a pleasure to read your poems!
a 5 without much to say, I do like negotiable, negligent, glimpse, fiscal fervor, etc. "tumescent flesh" ahh, but as weak point, not bad.
he is an expert in haiku. How many alts doth thou have? Maybe 4 or 5 or more? and they are all excellent poets/ storytellers in their own right.
Wow, you know how to write! I am continually impressed with your stuff. Five and a recommend...you are also the only other person here who writes tanka...