Hochwasser

Poem Info
66 words
4.75
4.8k
3
Poem does not have any tags
Share this Poem

Font Size

Default Font Size

Font Spacing

Default Font Spacing

Font Face

Default Font Face

Reading Theme

Default Theme (White)
You need to Log In or Sign Up to have your customization saved in your Literotica profile.
PUBLIC BETA

Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.

You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.

Click here
Kaishaku
Kaishaku
61 Followers

 

"Nein danka," she says,
her wry smile belies truth -
the negotiable opportunity
like an errant strap
some negligent negligee
exposes a forbidden glimpse
concealed before a hope
until floodlit in red light.
Euros slip beneath
to tumescent flesh,
fiscal fervor yields
to a torrent of touch,
fingers, tongue and cock
momentarily inundate
then recede to damp aftermath
and thick mud of money.

 

Kaishaku
Kaishaku
61 Followers
Please rate this poem
The author would appreciate your feedback.
  • COMMENTS
Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
5 Comments
AngelineAngelineabout 13 years ago
Excellent writing

and an excellent example of no wasted words: you made every one work. Always a pleasure to read your poems!

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
*

a 5 without much to say, I do like negotiable, negligent, glimpse, fiscal fervor, etc. "tumescent flesh" ahh, but as weak point, not bad.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
and among other things

he is an expert in haiku. How many alts doth thou have? Maybe 4 or 5 or more? and they are all excellent poets/ storytellers in their own right.

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureabout 13 years ago
Sexy....

...and suggestive, sounds good too when read aloud.

Tess

vrosej10vrosej10about 13 years ago
~

Wow, you know how to write! I am continually impressed with your stuff. Five and a recommend...you are also the only other person here who writes tanka...