hot dove lather

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hot dove lather
slides between

and suddenly
I am your
saddle soap
harness leather oil
shaking
biting the bit
shaking
blinders

pull me in

until I stand calm
for the hiss hot metal
sharp pound nail
into my dead parts

hold breath for the spur
feeling only dove soft
lather under finger strokes
and the rain shower waters
waiting for heavy boots on cool tile

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4 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
GOOD ONE!

I don't know jack about horses but I know what I like.

Very erotic.

smithpetersmithpeterabout 20 years ago
provocative but soothing

a delightful romp

the sugar on my cheerios

the salt next to the ketchup

in packets in my pockets

the bubble of juice lurking in the center of my hamburger

a real chin dripper

my cup of tea

now

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Reminded me of the time

I met a ponygirl in full tack. An interesting experience that your poem brought back to me. Your images here have an exciting erotic undercurrent, subtle, but definite. Thank you for these wonderful images...

jim : )

TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
Excellent

So much can be read into this.

from a horse to a D/s relationship

Great work.

Sparse but says enough to let the reader write his own story.

Very nice

Thank you

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