- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Hot Incandescent Spheres Of Gas
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Click hereI'm watching the sky
and I hear the screendoor hinges squeak as you open it.
You sit next to me
and I feel your hand on my shoulder.
"It's pretty," you murmur.
I look away.
"I miss the stars."
You only ruffle my hair and sigh.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 19 years ago...word snapshot catching a tiny moment in time perfectly.
Tess
dcpoet44almost 19 years agoand that screen door hinges squeak is killer. small it is but very effective........don
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoof a soulful moment. You stopped time here and allowed us the peace and emotions of a split second of living...
thank you
du~
sackalmost 19 years agoWhich is already starting to become a definite hallmark of your style!
Jennifer Calmost 19 years agoI love the grace in this,
so simple and pure.
Really nice piece,
Thanks.
~ Jenn
