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How did we get here

bytodski28©

Goosebumps raise little erections of
hair follicles as breath touches
softly at the nape of your neck

trigger a shiver reaction
vanilla scented satin doll softness
hands grip your wrists
fingers mould in delicate peach
take the shape of fingerprint forensics
purple hue of lovers bruises
to bloom tomorrow

teeth sink into bliss tasting flesh
tease and kiss
slide and glide to the line of jaw
lips mash together gentle
abandoned in twirl of
unplanned exploration
clothes discarded like so much
windblown nothing

hip bones fit my hands
I lift
legs flung round
pelvis ground wet patch
tanned hue of summers touch
skin gilded in golden tones
muffle my mouth with the taste of you
deafen my ears with your joy
coat my fingers in paint so I may
trace my name upon your thighs
treat me with rapture in your eyes

watch the rise and fall of mounded breast
gasps and breath heave from your chest
test my linguistics and tongue dexterity
as we chase the race for running water
my hands knead and need the feel
of calf muscle tense,

toes pointed
dancing invisible high heels
running in mid air, hands in my hair
God's name on your lips
face red as molten metal
the clench and tense of vibrating fury
hold the pace the line of sight
you start to fight the pleasure intense
overpowers all sense of reason
with uncontrolled abandon you boil over
the taste of you better than chocolate

I cup the rise of pubic cleft let you feel
my appreciation as you rest
palm hot on panty tanned lines
your hands run up and over
caressing yourself as if to ease and settle
the sensations running through every
nerve

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by greenmountaineer05/24/14

This is really well written, tod. I'd characterize this as a love poem, which for me is a step above "erotic." The words are beautiful.

My only quibble is in stanza 5, lines 4&5. I like word play,more...

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by Matryoshka05/24/14

Immersion

The title says it all. Reading this I had a crystal clear picture in my head. I went along for the ride and could almost feel her contented sigh while trembling hands trace as if to not willing to letmore...

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by Ashesh905/22/14

Goosebumps raise little erections of hairfollicles

As i nuzzle gently @ the nape of your neck .........
From the startin' lines this is a high- tension Erotic piece ---coup de grace !!! I really bathed in a frission of erotique excitement readin' thismore...

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