- Non-Erotic Poetry
- How Did You Get To Me?
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Click hereI felt you the other night while i slept
crept in like a thief but left a gift instead.
Breath whispered upon my flesh
words rouse
commanding senses
ignites
inspiring rush.
After all this time
how did you do that,
awaken that which i thought dead?
- COMMENTS
Jennifer Calmost 19 years agodescriptive wording
loved the mystery
behind this.
Very good!
Thanks
~ J
dcpoet44almost 19 years agoyou've submitted, i can see how writing is starting to come into the picture of things. i like this too. i think you could look to others on this though. the phrase of "like a thief" could be considered overused. but in this case it may be just fine. i didn't see any others that popped up.......don
