hush (terzanelle)

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echoes_s
echoes_s
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Hush he said with whispered hand
petals drawn gently from my heart
then calm he puckered every strand

with love he tendered tears apart
countered shadows to embered grace
petals drawn gently from my heart

words sooth a quiet ravaged face
dusted clouds bared trembling cries
countered shadows to embered grace

cast hearts to bleary eyes arise
what sleeping creature beauty plays
dusted clouds bared trembling cries

tears of joy rejoice wanton displays
your love a flame at modest tend
what sleeping creature beauty plays

we folded time with sunset blend
hush he said with whispered hand
your love a flame at modest tend
then calm he puckered every strand

echoes_s
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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
hush

been a long time since I have read the poetic charm of echo (~_*) shhhhh!!!!! <grinin' <whispers... 'nice write!

WickedEveWickedEveover 17 years ago
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I'm a terzanelle groupie. I'm throwing my poems, like panties, at your terzy. ;)

LiarLiarover 17 years ago
:)

Great to see you write agaqin. I've missed the music.

bluerainsbluerainsover 17 years ago
This poem

is mentioned on today's review...welcome back

champagne1982champagne1982over 17 years ago
the echoes

of a pretty whisper are back and welcome

a lovely terzanelle and as you know, it blends the villanelle and terza rima perfectly -

or it least so well that MNS and I were roused to blurting out wrong answers until I guessed right. LOL

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