- Non-Erotic Poetry
- I Ain't Asking For Much
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Click herein country music, it is either outlaw or bullshit.
the way the world should be. those who carry
weapons waiting for some fool to give them a zimmerman. I see no reason to leave out anything. those who think that the election of a man mainstreet corn-flower eyed america thinks is the anti-KKKhrist.
void void void
everything I love is white and dumb and capitalist. I embrace the beast. I ride or suck it into submission.'tis the case of all half black doe-eyed girls who end up the one with all of the power and some of the fetters. Some days my ankles bleed. Other days the blood flows
from the center. I've got to hold out. I have a theory or two about time and existence.
If I told
you time travel was a devil's three-way...
- COMMENTS
tazz317over 10 years agobut the other side, coffee is more than a dime and BS is not gratis, TK U MLJ LV NV
Anonymousover 10 years agoI don’t know about word salads but I sympathize very much with the feelings expressed in your piece.
I certainly agree with your view on language usage.
Desejoover 10 years agoI like your word salads. They are...spiked.
But I agree with what I think 1201 is saying - this one doesn't hold together. The culprit is the void void void. I think if you eliminate that line, it's stronger. Just my two cents.
susansnowover 10 years agoAuthorWell, as a busy professional, sometimes all I can do is a word salad to express how I really feel. I'm sorry that you want something more from me...
I like to approach language in a fighting stance, knives drawn and ready. I think it is a writer's responsibility to demand more from language. To tests the limits of propriety and make the words succumb to you. I want to bend language inside out and create trails of word and meaning that when leaving the tip of your tongue, rolls off like grape jam and toast. If you don't like what I've prepped and served, don't take seconds. Thank you for your comments.
twelveooneover 10 years agois like a tampon at times
I Ain't Asking For Much
just might be nice if I saw susansnow leave some comments on others, instead of word salads in tow.
didn't vote
