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Click hereI am as free as I am bound.
I am as alive as I am dead
I am as weak as I am strong
I am as skilled as I am inept
I am as clean as I am dirty
I am as clear as I am confused
I am as low as I am high
I am as unloved as I am beloved
I am as cursed as I am blest
I am as haunty as I am humble
I am as lost as I am found
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jthserraover 18 years agothis chant of dichotomy would be more powerful if you showed me how the contradictions were a part of you, not just told me. Break up the the repetition of the "I am..." with a few lines prestenting concrete examples of how you are both haunty and humble, unloved and beloved. I think that would strengthen this poem a lot.
jim : )
