- Erotic Poetry
- I Call For A Lover
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I call for a lover to
Eradicate my wants,
To gratify my needs
And bedazzle me with vehemence.
Send me perfection personified
To cover me in stimulation
And smother me in sex.
Strip my deprived body bare
Shed me of unnecessary layers
And burrow beneath my skin.
Exploit my nakedness and
Abuse my mind
Ravish me with power.
Straddle me in strength
And harness my frustration
Take me
Own me I am yours
I succumb to you
Use me.
Knead my aching flesh
Bruise me bite me
Fuck me.
Lead me to the point of no return
To the outer limits,
Manipulate my essence.
Satisfy my every craving
Leave me in no mistake
That you were here.
Take me
Use me
Fuck me.
I call for this
I call for a lover
I call for you.
- COMMENTS
Bill Dadaover 18 years agoI agree with Du and Syndra Lynn. Like Du, I liked how you started with the mind and worked down the core of it. I am confused about you liking anonymous' rewrite. The rewrite seemed like your original poem except for leaving out some of the good stuff. For instance anonymous leaves 'fuck me' out of the poem in the rewrite. That is like ripping the guts out of the poem.
ty,bd
NW Wolfover 18 years ago(Gentle Smile)... you have my Attention (Again) Pretty Lady...
NW Wolf...
Jennifer Cover 18 years agoAuthorto all who have commented ~
sand ~ thanks for your honesty
it's appreciated, i'm still learning.
Thanks for the suggestion ~ I actually
really like the rewrite!
many thanks to you all
~ Jenn
Anonymousover 18 years agoeveryone is giving you a strike, but I thought it needed
a bit more mystery. I did like the way you laid 'I Call
For A Lover' out, but I saw nothing new or different. A nice
4. sand
Anonymousover 18 years agoI call for a lover
to eradicate my wants,
gratify my needs
and bedazzle me with vehemence.
Send me perfection personified
to cover me in stimulation
and smother me in sex.
Strip my deprived body bare.
Shed me of unnecessary layers
and burrow beneath my skin.
Exploit my nakedness
and abuse my mind.
Ravish me with power.
Straddle me in strength
and harness my frustration.
Take me.
Own me.
Satisfy my every craving.
Leave me with no mistake
that you were here.
I call for this
I call for a lover
I call for you.
