- Non-Erotic Poetry
- I Demand An Apology
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WRITTEN FOR AND ABOUT A GUY WHO HURT ME VERY BADLY RECENTLY
Liar!
I will always remember
The cruel, hurtful things that you said
The pain you inflicted that night when you broke my heart
My world fell apart
All I ever did was love and adore you
All you ever did was betray me
Stabbing me in the back
All in the name of your precious love
Sending my pen flying across the page as....
I demand an apology!
You were wrong
I was wrong
So why don't you just stand up, be a man and admit it?
Admit that you made a mistake
The worse mistake of your life
Beliving lies over the truth you knew to be in your heart
Cut me like a knife and for what?
So she could smile at you and kiss you another good night
Makes me sick
Makes me scream again and again
Till you give in
I demand an apology!
Are you so insecure?
So devoid of any and all manhood that you must reduce yourself to this?
A shell of the man I thought could maybe be my new best friend for life
You were so damm much to me
Someone I trusted
Someone I loved
Now in one heartrending moment all those hopes and dreams I had for us are
shattered
Beyond repair
Beyond ever being to go back to the way we were
Shaking my head in saddness
Trying to clear the tears and the cowebs from my eyes
Wondering how I could have ever been so blind
Never thinking that now I would have to write to you to say....
Damm you!
I demand an apology!
I've said my peace
I've told you how I feel
Now I'm leaving it up to you to decide
Is she worth it?
Worth all the pain and the heartache?
Is she really worth losing a friend over?
Me or her?
Who will you choose?
Who will be the one whose hand you're gonna be holding 20 years from now?
Only one right thing to do and you know what it is
So don't make me say it again
Don't make me scream at you one more time
These words bold, loud, and so damm angry
I DEMAND AN APOLOGY!
By RAMONA THOMPSON
© 2006 RAMONA THOMPSON (All rights reserved)
- COMMENTS
oregon_galover 17 years agoI think now that you have put it all down on paper...and your frustration has burned a trail, do a rewrite. take your energy and cut this verbiage by 2/3rd. reduce and carefully pick your words. turn your anger towards a carefully constructed piece. Be laser. I disagree with mr annonymous's rant without constructive suggestions. there is merit in your theme. now, you just need to hone your thoughts in a poetic way. good luck and i would love to see your rewrite!
Anonymousover 17 years agoan apology for having to read this twaddle. Read some poetry, pretty please?
And think about what you want to write instead of writing this trash, it's not worth stealing so don't bother putting the copyright symbol underneath. When you start writing stuff of publishable quality, then you can.
