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Click herefrom a vanishing corner of the sky
on whispered ethereal angel song
far beyond the rustling branches
far above the cumulus streaking
I hear a melody...
the plaintive song-flute
ancient holy chant
exquisite drone
all words are lost
to poignant emotion
a cooing mourning dove
just beyond consciousness
a newborn child laughing
just beyond time
a helping hand reaching
just beyond dimension
I am transfixed
for it is a poem calling
begging for release
needing to be written
as the dulcet tones fade
into beautiful memory
and the distant pipes
echo in my heart
I pick up my pen-
When the creative voice calls ~ willingly partake of the inspiration being given. Loved the musical references. Well Done!
and lots of great lines......but i'll pick this:
a cooing mourning dove
just beyond consciousness
that is just splendid.....nicely done........don
always inspire visual imagery that is beautiful and poignant. I wish I could write poetry instead of murder..lol. Great job Sack, you never disappoint.
I can see the images evoked by the sounds. Really well done! I like it a lot!