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I miss the space
that lies between
two single words from us,
the time spent in talks
and in happy thoughts,
no matter where they go;
no matter if they go to peaks
or to depths, to snow or silly things,
I miss them, just too much.

I miss the day I met you
because then
there was everything to build
and everything to know,
without fear, nor scary thoughts,
but only secrets to go through.

I miss our nights,
and the light in my soul
made only by your smile
and now it's not like
I miss a single word:
I miss everything, I miss you.

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erectus123erectus123almost 11 years ago
nice poem, very personal...if I may suggest, use "or",not "nor"......use "nor"if following "neither"

'Neither … nor' is used in sentences in a negative sense meaning "not this one nor the other, not this nor that, not he nor she, etc.". about english.com

“Nor” doesn’t necessarily have to appear in a sentence with the word “neither.” “Nor” can start a sentence. For example, if you’ve just mentioned that you don’t usually wake up at 6 a.m. and you want to continue being negative, you can start another sentence with “nor”: “Nor do I like to wake up at 5 a.m.” Another option is to combine the two negative ideas into one sentence and then start the second part with “nor”: “I don’t usually wake up at 6 a.m., nor do I like to wake up at 5 a.m.” grammar quick easy tips