- Erotic Poetry
- I Miss You So
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Click hereWant to be with you,
Wish I was there.
Hold you close,
Feel your hands.
Your lips on mine,
Heart starts beating.
What a touch!
Those fingers of yours.
Feel those shivers,
How about you?
I kiss your lips.
Your hands they wander.
I feel them lower,
Caressing my ass, mmm.
My tongue wants yours.
Your hands go lower,
Hands on thighs,
Under dress.
Tongue dances with yours.
Feel your cock,
Growing against me.
Lifting my dress
Fingers in garter.
Oh, my God!!
Such excitement.
Undo buttons,
Kissing your chest.
Feeling you move,
Rubbing against me.
Pants undone
Hands slide down,
Against your soft skin.
Release your cock,
My fingers stroking.
Fingers in panties
Feeling quite wet,
Playing with clit.
Sliding deeper
Further in pussy.
Damn, you’re soo good!
I want you!
Have missed you!
Lay me down,
Fuck me slowly.
Guiding you in,
Oh, myGOD!!
What do you feel?
So soft and warm and wet
Feeling you build,
Excitement you can’t contain.
In and out, move with you,
My arms around
Lips on yours
Holding your tight.
I’ll cum with you baby
I will, I will.
Needing you!
Wanting you!
- COMMENTS
WickedEveabout 19 years agoI'm not sure if you're serious about poetry or not. Many post poems here simply for the pleasure of it. If you do want to write better poetry, then keep reading and writing. You're at an exciting stage of discovery.
My Erotic Taleabout 19 years agothat spirals down with witty words and twists and turns in descent to a base ending. a very good poem, not sure how some one could think not?
Trent_Dutchabout 19 years agoI don't know what you have done to annoy the previous poster, but it must have been something terrible. My advice is to ignore him/her.
Yes, the present submission feels a little generic, a little staid. It lacks structure and a rhythm. It does need a lot of work. But... thats how a good poet is created. S/he learns from their mistakes... they learn where they go wrong, and change it. They learn where they are going right and they utilise that.
One thing I must say in defence of your poem is that I appreciate its directness. It has a theme and an idea, which is adhered to throughout... It does not fall into the hole of subtlety/vaguery/esotericness. It's not filled with words the author probably just got from their thesaurus.
I hope that you do not take the words of the previous poster (I notice also that he/she has also placed a similar comment on your other submission today... unless its someone else entirely) to heart, and let them discourage you. If you are serious about writing poetry and improving, never, ever listen to spiteful and purely negative comments. If they get to you too much, turn off voting and public comments, submit you poems and then ask in the poetry discussion forums for serious critique and feedback (that way, posters cannot hide behind anonymity, and you will be receiving attention from experienced poets).
Anonymousabout 19 years agoIt's all been said before! This is unoriginal and lacking in depth, pure regurgitated rubbish!
