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Click hereI bite my tongue
The pain is like missing you
I chew my lip
My mind escapes
The boxes are partially full
The van on Sunday
Will close another chapter
Into a new space
And wonder.......................
Giving descriptions and examples in your poem is good thing. You show the reader what the pain of missing is like by comparing it to biting your tongue. And you give some good descriptions with the boxes and van.