I shall have you

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Desejo
Desejo
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I shall swallow you in luscious words
unleash a tide of doubt
tie sailors knots in pride
with strands of wet hair

bite off brass buttons with my teeth

I shall ignore pleas for amnesty
throw you onto the bed
spread your thighs
breathe desire into the band of your briefs
cup what you have protected

secure perimeters with evasive action

I shall sow your hips with my need
engrave your ribs with my tongue
grab your ass
and take you
however I like

I shall have you, Marine.

Desejo
Desejo
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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
HANDLE WITH CARE

the servicemans uniform is sacrosanct, TK U MLJ LV NV

twelveoonetwelveooneover 11 years ago
this time i voted

5ed,

liked the teeth

god what an animal

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 13 years ago
A sailin'

A sailin'

to an H we go

Really?

Defend.

I did not vote, but question, I see one comment, one reply. tell me why.

DesejoDesejoalmost 13 years agoAuthor
teeth

Chipbutty - thanks, great suggestion. You are right, I don't need the teeth. But I have such nice sharp teeth it's hard to resist adding them in...(smile). Your suggestions are most appreciated, as always.

buttersbuttersalmost 13 years ago
love it :D

the sounds delight my ear, the images my mind, the language my spirit...

I shall swallow you in luscious words

unleash a tide of doubt

bite off brass buttons

breathe desire into the band of your briefs

cup what you have protected

secure perimeters with evasive action

I shall sow your hips with my need

engrave your ribs with my tongue

there's originality of phrasing that can't but help appeal, and a lone quibble of do you need 'with my teeth'? if you want to keep 'teeth' for its aural links, perhaps something like 'bite off brass buttons with teeth ignoring pleas for amnesty' ?