- Erotic Poetry
- I Want To Be Your Man
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You make me wish I were a man
with long fingers for unbuttoning your secrets
and parts for sinking myself into you
deep enough to feel your soft ends.
You make me wish I was a man
wide chest for head resting,
tucking your hair behind your ears
safe sleeping on heart sounds.
I crave the opiate of your breath
that has brought strong men trembling
for you attentions. I want to feed
and feast upon your addictions.
You my always untouchable
unknowable, crossing legs and fingers and wires
I want to be the man who sees you
unedited, no modest blur but focused, mine.
- COMMENTS
dcpoet44over 18 years agoI crave the opiate of your breath
that has brought strong men trembling
for you attentions. I want to feed
and feast upon your addictions.
*****
nice piece seattle......don
BlackShanglanover 18 years agoPowerful, lean, rich, and evocative. Very fine work.
My Erotic Taleover 18 years agoThis is a good topic, men claim they would love to be women and would be sluts <grin> and then women want to be men...well that's your poem <grin> I enjoyed your write.
sweet GA peachesover 18 years agowant to be in 20 degree weather, to chill this HEAT ... *winks*.... this is by far a most splendid performance of writing and thoughts, and prevoking thoughts.. and touching thoughts, O' my, I do believe it is hot in here.. I loved it ... every line, and it is un.for.get.a.ble. sweetest peaches to ya'.. sGp
twelveooneover 18 years agocould you change the words, a little and sing it to me, maybe it's me, the un's seem to undulate and make it unforgetable
