tagErotic Poetryi was polite

i was polite

bykokshur©

I was very polite
when I asked him to fuck me
please I said
please fuck me
please slide your cock
your big cock
into my ass
please I said
please fuck me
he was not so polite
when he spread my ass cheeks
when he shoved his cock deep
thrust his cock into me
hard and fast
hard and fast
he fucked me
pounded my ass
his cock
his long hard cock
shoved deep into me
again and again
I felt his long hard cock
as it filled me again and again
and when he came
his jizz on my ass cheeks
and the small of my back
I was very polite
thank you I said

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by erectus12302/07/13

nice-5

that you can relate to various sexual appetites, I liked your poem but I would have wanted a little more exuberance or detail as to what bottom was feeling or thinking, but perhaps the bottom is demuremore...

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