Icarus

byMarshmallow08©

I used to watch Icarus
Jump across your bicep
As you moved.

Such an odd tattoo.
I never understood
How Icarus never knew
That he was too close
Damned to fall
However high he flew.

Hubris, better than the gods
I thought I could bring you through
I believed those impossible odds
You swore that you had told the truth.

But when the slow burn began
Wax dripped, came loose
I was clinging to the horizon
Reaching out for your scorching hand
Stretching out to grasp you
Obliterated in the glare
There were so many feathers
Feathers falling everywhere.

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by demure10102/24/13

Well told

and very original!

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by greenmountaineer02/13/13

Some nice twists and turns here, very original.

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by rubrica02/11/13

Invoking

I notice so many people don't seem to like poetry, compared to the erotic story section, the poetry section is looking a little bare. I hope this changes at some point. Your poem stood out. It's alwaysmore...

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by HarryHill02/07/13

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