If his chest had been a mortar...

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Epmd607
Epmd607
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Some night, I'll sweat
and feel a stricture,
then peel my lip and wonder,
whether you'll frame my pen
or my picture.

Epmd607
Epmd607
203 Followers
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Epmd607Epmd607about 15 years agoAuthor
kotk

I'm sorry that english is your second language, I'm sure there's a literotica for maladroit Indians.

KOTKKOTKabout 15 years ago
Hey Fucker

STOP taking your daddy's side...Oh!!!! I mean "bflagsst" side & remember one thing you are now playing with fire. You are going to pay for your stupidity. You tini-mini creatures don't know what you are doing. Ummm...... I just love this game & I love to play it. Your Bad time have started. Tell your dady (bflagsst) Hi.

PandoraGlittersPandoraGlittersabout 15 years ago
Evocative

I love how much you achieved with such economy.

annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 15 years ago
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googled it too :) I had no idea. Interesting.

this part of the poem "wonder,

whether you'll frame my pen

or my picture." I adore. Adore adore adore. It is essential. A life boiled down, what is left after water.

~peel my lip~ kind of gave me the willies. Too visceral, unless that is what you were going for? I might be missing something very obvious, like the ketchup in the front of the fridge.

overall, excellent.

bflagsstbflagsstabout 15 years ago
I had to google your title

I guess I'm not as well read as I hoped.

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