- Non-Erotic Poetry
- If I didn't laugh
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When people give us
That wink and smirk,
I shake my head and laugh.
I laugh because
Your heart already belongs to someone
A thousand miles away.
I laugh because
You’re so perfectly oblivious to those knowing looks
Always thrown our way.
I laugh because
We’re the quintessential example of
Platonic close friends.
I laugh because
If I didn’t,
I would cry.
- COMMENTS
twelveooneabout 13 years agowith a cliche. S2 is also cliched. This is not a bad structure, and a nice indirection, a good solid 4. Perhaps, if there was something that grabbed me...
theognisabout 13 years agoI like it, and I'm giving you a five on the assumption you'll change the second stanza to this:
I laugh because
Your heart already belongs to someone
A thousand miles away.
