Waking eyes and moist flesh renew
Momentary fervor and starry dew
Recall of passionate stirrings mesh
Now solitary feminine desires refresh
Intensities intention my soul forsake
Body thirst for rapture of heavens ache
Keeping time with wildly stirring trance
Quenching thirst with pleasures dance
Crescendo wakens the rushing swell
No angel or fiend banned and fell
Rushing climax intense gives way
Moments turning years, pausing day
Body exposed in joyous erotic shame
Obsess and depart the rousing game
I raise and stir to face scornful effect
Covetous green eyes render and reject
I bow awaiting sweet judgments pain
This decadent sin unhurried to wane
The God affirms mournful and just
Wrath indeed burns for My illicit lust
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over reliance
on rhyming couplets for start
parse this fragment
Body thirst for rapture of heavens ache
this is not real language - you are larding
depend more on this
render and reject as in
Covetous green eyes render and reject
and drop nonsense like Covetous (larding)
didn't votemore...
A Catholic Girl???
Per say..... I enjoyed your poem and the implications that society (specifically morals from the religious sectors) have upon the conscious of women and to some extent men. Nicely done and thanks for sharing.more...
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