I'm done

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I was there
but you didn't see me
I was in so deep
the darkness became me
and you thought I was all light
but I wasn't
I was screaming
and you didn't hear me
now I can't know you anymore
I'm not there now
but the stink and gorge
will always be part of me
and you must keep your hands clean.

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impressiveimpressivealmost 18 years ago
Yes, this resonates

Well done! ~Imp

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyalmost 18 years ago
Very Soft

I can see you reaching my friend. I know the feeling, the images, and the hurt. Yes, one must ... keep the hands clean. I felt this deeply ...

More Please ~

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