I'm Out

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folding....

from the hectic rush,
truant to the truth
captivated by simple pleasures

color me beach blond
paint me surf side aqua,
collect my tears in long neck bottles
before wind and sand blind me........
       to all your taunts and threats

find my bones above high tide
never wonder why,
I chose solitude
above the undertow of modern man

my lack of particapation.....
       in a game already lost

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Count me in

and another wonderful pen from my favorite poet...must be the beach and the beer...ah...tune in drop out...old hippies never die...luv it ..Sand.../blue

Maria2394Maria2394about 18 years ago
I Just love the beach

and every single poem you eeek out of your proximity to the ocean. Good work, spike, enjoyed it more than a full moon on myrtle when the tide is high:)

xoxox

LiarLiarabout 18 years ago
Out...

Who doesn't want out now and then?

"color me beach blond

paint me surf side aqua"

Can't say why exactly, but those lines shine.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
~~

The solitude of dry land

Over the turbulence of

Ocean storms of

Emotional involvement.

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